2011.12.2北美新托福考试写作真题 （三）

【假说 - 反驳答题模板】

Introduction

In the lecture, the professor is skeptical about the idea of the reading passage that

阅读材料中的假说

The professor argues that 讲义中的反驳

Body paragraphs

Firstly, in the reading passage，阅读材料中的论据 1

On the contrary, the professor says that 反驳理由 1

On top of that, the reading passage describes that 阅读材料中的论据 2

However, the professor asserts that 反驳理由 2 的细节

Finally, the professor disproves the reading’s idea that 阅读材料中的论据 3

The professor points out that 反驳理由 3

【假说】

In the lecture, the professor is skeptical about the idea of thereading passage that the Tyrannosaurus Rex is a super fast runner.

【反驳】

The professor instead argues that the reasons in the reading are not correct.

【假说根据 1】 Firstly, in the reading passage, T-rex can run fast because theteeth marks found on the skeletal remains of small dinosaurs indicate

【反驳理由 1】 that it is a quick runner. On the contrary, the professor says thatthe teeth marks on the bone cannot prove the T-rex can run fast,because animals eat whatever they can get when they are starving.

The swift prey might be dead meat.

【假说根据 2】 On top of that, the reading passage describes that T-rex is a swiftdinosaur because its bone structure is similar to one of another fast

【反驳理由 2】 predator, the tiger. However, the professor asserts that the bonestructure might be similar to that of the tiger, but it is very thin and can break easily if runs too fast.

【假说根据 3】 Finally, the professor disproves the reading’s idea that T-rex is a fast runner because the footprints of its relative from the fossil evidence show its feet are farther apart than other animal species.

【反驳理由 3】 The professor, however, points out that the size of the T-rex head is so big that it cannot run faster than its relative who has a small head.

Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience

Directions:

For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state,explain and support your opinion on an issue.

Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the

organization of your essay, and the quality and accuracy of the language you use to express your ideas.

You have 30 minutes to plan and complete your essay.

Write your essay in the space provided.

【Essay Topic】

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Should a work team or team leader listen to the advice of the team members?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

文章的内容形成之前，在头脑中是抽象的想法。而我们需要将思路填入框架 (outline) 中。然后，在这个框架内填充内容，这样一篇文章就完成了。先设定好文章框架，如下所示：

Introduction 首段

thesis statement

cannot solve all problems alone members’ advice should be heard and considered everybody brings ideas to the table → good work sense of equality

Body 中间段

Topic  should listen to

Detail  if not, → dissatisfaction and contempt among the team members→ hurt company morale → production/deadline/team goal if only listen to few, → favoritism among the staff → same problem

Topic   people bring different ideas ∵ no one has all the answers

taking ideas → ↑ $

Detail  if one × solve a problem, others will help∴ taking ideas × bad

Topic taking suggestion → equality

Detail  if leader listen to team, members feel useful, friends, equal equality btw members = security

Conclusion 总结

Summary  should listen

∵ listen × hurt anyone, ↓ division btw members and leader