雅思作文高分范文集锦

雅思写作一直雅思烤鸭备考的重点，为了方便雅思备考，新航道整理了雅思作文高分范文。范文对于初备雅思写作的考生有很大帮助，考生可以从范文中理解写作思路，举一反三，形成自己的写作风格。

下面我们先看下，雅思官方给的雅思写作范文与解析

雅思写作题目：

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To

what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

官方给出的高分答案

Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that "traditional skills and ways of life" are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community. In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life. Surely, few people would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!

Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life. For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools.

Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmons; it can now be ordered from and delivered to, anywhere in the world.

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means "pointless", in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

雅思高分范文解析

Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed.（句话当中，作者直接说出了自己的观点，这有点区别于我们中国学生通常所使用的背景开头方式，但是它在这个开头中也使用了两个中国学生不大使用的结构，一个是overall，另外一个是过去分词做后 置定语，既expressed） I would like to begin by pointing out that "traditional skills and ways of life" are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.(作者在这个地方所提出的观点非常的犀利，同时使用的结构也很不错， 我们现在来看一下，I would like to do 我想做...，这个结构是中国学生都非常熟悉的，但是他随后使用的by doing就比较的标新 立异，随后他又使用了一个宾语从句，这样结构就丰满起来了。同时，作者对于标点符号的使用也是非常具有特色的，这里面的符号确实起到了加强的作用，同学 们以后要注意对于标点符号的使用。另外，这里面的连词but虽然不是很难，但是却是用的非常恰倒好处。希望大家可以借鉴这样的一种写法。再者，这里面， 考官没有使belong to 这样的结构来表示属于，而是很简洁的使用了be of，这说明，简洁的表达受到了考官的关注。更为重要的是作者给出了一 个别人都不大容易想到的观点，传统的技能以及生活方式并不是自然的属于某一个国家的，而是属于某一种文化和区域)

In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things.（这个句子是由40个单词所组成的，其中含有的结构都是中国学生耳熟能详的，但是大家需 要注意如下的3个特点：1，考官在这里所使用的开头句就非常具有震撼力，在很多方面来说，文明史就是科技史，大家想想，你们在写作文的时候有没有这样的 一种思维观？2，考官再次显示了标点符号的重要性，大家在举例的时候是不是比较喜欢使用for instance和for example？而考官在这里面就只使用了一个简单的"："，另人很绝望啊！佩服的绝望，他的使用不仅最简单，而且最准确。随后它所举的例子是Mars在分析近期高分作文的时候经 常发现的一种结构，既排比，这种结构现在在8分以及满分作文中屡见不鲜，成方兴未艾之势，我想原因就在于它的一种力量性。大家应该好好的把握这种结 构。3，思想的连续性也在这句话中得到了充分的体现。作者开头说的是文明史就是科技史记，随后在举出了例证之后，自然引导出了这样的一个观点，我们的进 步是以坚持传统方式为起点的。思想并证明着。大家应该记得这样的思路。）Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life.（在这句话当中，作者非常巧妙的使用了对比法，一开始说，很多科技，比如大规 模杀伤性武器，是存在负面作用的，而其它的科技，例如医学进步，则积极的促进了人民生活水平的提高，延长了人的寿命，从而极大的弥补了传统生活方式的缺陷！大家看到了没有，作者在对比的同时还在举例子，不厌其烦的举例子。例子是多么的重要啊！ Surely, few people would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!（作者在丝丝入扣的分析，旁征博引之后，忽然话锋一转，举起了批判的板斧，砍将下去。一语双关的说道，当人们还生活在洞穴当中的时候，很少有人会去保护这种传统的！这个可以理解为，当技术还没有发展到一定程度的时候，文化还很落后的时候，人们是不可能想到保护文化的。同时人们住在洞穴中这句话还可以理解为坐井观天，说狭隘的人怎么会想到保护 文化，非常之犀利）

Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life.（作者在段首又开始发彪了，又提出了一个具有建设性的观点，说有意思的是，科技可以在保持传统技能与生活方式的生命力方面做出积极的贡献） For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. （他又开始举例子了，一个离开例子就不能活的刀笔手。注：刀笔手指写文章很厉害的人，他可以用笔做刀，同时可以用刀把文章裁减成他想象的任何样子，而且不留痕迹，并且可以杀人于无形。高 手！这个例子初看比较奇怪，说，很多岛屿中的人口太少，建立正规的学校是不可能的。这个和科技有什么关系啊！？但你看他后面说的话）Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online.（他在解剖这个例子，教育专家已经能够通过因特网将课程传到网上，而不需要使孩子离开家庭来到大陆。这个角度是不是很刁钻？！） In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmons; it can now be ordered from and delivered to, anywhere in the world.（作者在这里面使用了一个比较诡异的写作方法，意识流！！！居然是意识流！！！当初JAMES JOYCE（詹姆斯乔伊斯）就是靠这个写作技法独步文坛。创作出了另世人惊奇的<尤利西斯>.本文中，考官通过岛屿孩子的例子说明了因特网的好处，同时又用因特网举出了另外的一个例子。明白这个 写作思路吗！A-B B-C C-D D-E，如果没有篇幅的限制，他可以任意的导出。而且他这次的例子又是那么奇怪，居然说的是因特网以及现代的冷冻技术的应用使得传统的马哈鱼加工工艺保留了下来。现在，马哈鱼可以在全球达成定购与收购）。

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means "pointless", in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.（收尾段，考官写的很平易，比较厚道，但是也有锋芒藏在其中。他先是使用了一个介词结构without suggesting，表明他并不认为所有的科技都 是好的，然后又说，他认为也不可以说使用现代科技保护传统是没有意义的。最后的一句话有点作报告结束时候的感觉，我们不应该忽略科技，因为它可以成为我 们的朋友也可以对我们的生活方式起到支持作用。他传统文化也要了，技术也没扔，总之是完美结局。Star well, end well.）

雅思作文高分范文（二）-建筑风格

　　Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

　　In recent years， an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest， especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected， however， I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.

　　One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside， they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.

　　Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics， for example. Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs. In the long run， this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.

　　Of course， traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations， but at the same time， we don’t have to live in the past.

Ultimately， each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it comes to building styles， but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all， if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.

雅思作文高分范文（三）-环境保护

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what do you agree or disagree?

　　Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges. However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue. My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.

　　In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history. Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone. So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it; environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.

　　Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies. For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.

　　However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute. Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness; companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits. But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.

In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment. Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level. Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.

以上为新航道为大家整理的高分写作范文，希望考生能学会融会贯通，转变成自己的。

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