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Introduction 首段

题干的核心词总会为我们展开首段提供突破口，如：university professors，然后再联想我们自己的老师，他们是及时为我们解惑还是忙于自己的学术研究？也许都有。 因此，我们可以写出下面的内容：

When I was a university student, some professors were always available when I had questions or concerns. Other professors were always out of their office when I stopped by, and I never saw them outside the classroom.                                     

[An important debate in schools around the world is whether professors should spend more time doing their own research, or making themselves available for theeducation of students.]重述题目Should professors spend more time doing research or spend more time educating students?[In my opinion, a balance between doing research and teaching students is necessary,] 重述题目的目的是引出中心观点professors should be given ample time to conduct their research, but during school semesters in which they are teaching, they should always adhere to their responsibilities as an educator.

Body 中间段

本段强调做学术研究的重要性。

[Professors should be given enough time in their schedules to work independently for their own experiments, enquiries, and research.] 中心句

[This not only reinforces their profession, but creates an excellent reputation for those universities they are a part of.] 解释中心句：学术研究的重要性

The reason is that students are drawn to professionals who are making big contributions in their field. [Forexample, a class of young poets would probably prefer to be instructed by a scholar who has published his or her own poetry.] 举例

本段讨论教学的重要性。

[With that point made, however, a school should also ensure that a professor is available when he or she are supposed to be for his or her students.] 中心句 A geologist with a great deal of field work in volcanoes is an excellent instructor, but he or she must be on campus to teach his or her students, and also stay for his or her appointed office hours. [If they are unavailable, their vast knowledge and experience can not be passed on to the eager students who are enrolled in their courses. Also, if professors are regularly unavailable for their classes or office time, their schools will develop a negative reputation, and students’ enrollment can also be affected.] 假设的例证方式

Conclusion 末段

Keeping both the scholar’s and the student’s content in balance is a difficult job for professors, but it is necessary. University officials must continue to pursuethe right balance between research time and class time for their teachers.

提示：可以在末段的两句话中间加入以下内容。If an instructor is not given enough time to pursue his or her own academic interests, he or she is not likely to achieve any achievement in his or her field. On the other hand, if he or she is never around when he or she is needed for students,the pupils become disenchanted and make complaints or withdraw from the school altogether.

参考范文

When I was a university student, some professors were always available when Ihad questions or concerns. Other professors were always out of their office when I stopped by, and I never saw them outside the classroom. An important debate inschools around the world is whether professors should spend more time doing their own research, or making themselves available for the education of students. In myopinion, a balance between doing research and teaching students is necessary,professors should be given ample time to conduct their research, but duringschool semesters in which they are teaching, they should always adhere to theirresponsibilities as an educator.

Professors should be given enough time in their schedules to work independently for their own experiments, enquiries, and research. This not only reinforces their profession, but creates an excellent reputation for those universities they are a part of. The reason is that students are drawn to professionals who are making big contributions in their field. For example, a class of young poets would probably prefer to be instructed by a scholar who has published his or her own poetry.

With that point made, however, a school should also ensure that a professor is available when he or she is supposed to be for his or her students. A geologist with a great deal of field work in volcanoes is an excellent instructor, but he or she must be on campus to teach his or her students, and also stay for his or her appointed office hours. If they are unavailable, their vast knowledge and experience can not be passed on to the eager students who are enrolled in their courses. Also, if professors are regularly unavailable for their classes or office time, their schools will develop a negative reputation, and students’ enrollment can also be affected.

Keeping both the scholars and the student’s content in balance is a difficult job for professors, but it is necessary. University officials must continue to pursue the right balance between research time and class time for their teachers.